I did somewhat get the impression of the Republic Commando reference. However, I wasn't quite sure. But it does seem a little too deep to have that be the only motive. You are tricky, Ajax. :P

i still am lost

I'd kill today to get out of this darkness of your shadow.
I am tired from believing anyone can do this thing.
I've given everything away in hopes I could accomplish what so many groups have done before.
I barely touch the ladder.

Oh, it takes it's toll.
I've given up enough to make it to the top.
It's tearing me apart.
I'm singing from my heart.
But, hey...
I don't wanna say it.
I don't wanna hear how much you're making.
Always telling me to change our sound,
Always trying hard to bring us down.
I said hey,
I don't wanna say it,
One look at our name and you hate it.
It don't mean shit, I'm over it.

Take a deep breath,
Hold it in until there's nothing left.
I said take a deep breath,
Hold it in until there's nothing left.

I like this one more. Really good, Ajax. Keep it up.

I know what this ones about

o rly?

Yes sir. I wanna know if anybody else can figure it out, I already told Ajax what it is about and im right

Sort of.

I got it. But ill not spoil the fun for the others. =]

I'm lying in bed, trying to keep quiet.
Clasp your lips together, wright this forever.
I’m holding on tight, letting out a sigh.
Don’t ever let go, don’t open your eyes.
Breathe deeper, deeper.
Oh, I’ve never felt better.

I’m holding on, holding on for you…
Let’s finish this together, now.
Have you ever done something that makes you proud?
Once again, you’ll do it hands down.
I… I want to have a good time.

Hearts are beating faster, and nothing could be harder.
I see you getting nearer, amity.
Your breath is getting shorter,
My arms are tired.
You’re slowly sliding closer to me.

Losing my way, I dream of a day, I’m kissing the pain away.
Kissing the pain, I'm drifting away, I dream of a day, today.

For me it is quite obvious what this is about Ajax for other people that dont know it might not be

and by the way, these poems are amazing

You had a lucky guess.

It is quite simple, black and white actually
A tiny three letter word
It is taught as a bad thing
The combating effects made clear
Yet it is ingnored year after year

That is when it goes
It erodes the rock little by little
That once stood so firm
Until nothing is left but dust
The remainder as appealling as rust

Even now the Answer is there
Waiting and waiting and waiting
For a two word sentence as simple as its inverse
And with it, the past is gone, the rock is restored
And being of the Glorious River is still its reward


A bit confusing. Give it a try.
(Lol not nearly as nicely constructed as my Compatriot)

Dan, you amaze me.

Jeezus, i didnt know we had a bunch of poets here

btw Dan, your first post in a while is a poem